When the doors of vision are closed,
you always stepped in.
comment, compliment, complaint and sometimes argument,
are the things which are most happening.
What I should, what I shouldn’t?
What I could, what I couldn’t,
is the talk, you begin,
when the doors of vision are closed,
you always stepped in.
I did this which I shouldn’t,
I’ll repeat it which I wouldn’t.
She did that, he is doing it,
he hates me, she is loving it.
She kissed him, he shouted,
he slapped her, this is, she fought at.
Is all world’s blah blah, you keep on telling me,
When the doors of vision are closed,
you always stepped in.
because I am out of sight and u are missing me tonight.
May world thinks it is wrong, but u’ll say its right.
what I want to say is that, keep on setting me right,
because it makes my living more happening and worthwhile.
I love the way you say, u are not missing me,
and you keep on reminding me hour after hour,
that u are really not missing me.
And each line shows I am really not missing.
It makes me to feel,
I have you in name of god and god in name of you,
because, its you....and only you....
When the doors of vision are closed,
who always stepped in.
fantastic brooooo u have done an excellent job......well this is gud....n now u have increase the expectation as a poet..... well this lines r wonderful "WHEN THE DOORS OF VISION ARE CLOSED, WHO ALWAYS STEPPED IN"
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gr88 job!!!!!gud goin
i like it.....gud going.....keeep it up.....
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